Finally the writing resumes!

Since having a baby just over a month ago my writing has very much taken a back seat, but this week - finally! - I've managed to get a short story completed. It may get submitted or it may just sit on my computer as a reminder that I can write and be a mother!

Trying Scrivener

For the longest time I've written my stories in Word. It suits me, just bashing out words in a word processor, but it can be awkward when I go back to edit and I need to find a certain part, or want to move chapters and so on. I got a trial of Scrivener a few years ago and quite enjoyed it, so I decided to take the plunge and buy the full version. I'm hoping it will help me be more organised and make my editing easier.
I'll post a review in a few weeks once I've had a chance to use all the features!

Making diversity realistic

A lot has been said in the last few months about diversity in books. I'm all for it - but only if it's realistic.

Let me explain. In the area I live, 99% of people are white. The majority of those are English or Welsh, with a healthy number of Poles as well. Of the non-whites, there are a couple of Vietnamese families, a few Indian families, one or two Chinese families, and one or two black people. If I was to write a story set in my home town with several non-white characters then to people who knew the area, it wouldn't ring true, and it would detract from the story. Similarly, if I was to set my story in London and only had one or two non-white characters, then it would also not feel right.

The key is to be realistic with your demographics. If you do a quick search for demographics you can find all sorts of stats for the place you're writing about, but mostly it's just a case of common sense.

It's a similar case for including LGBTQ characters - if your story is set in a gay nightclub, chances are most of your characters will be LGBTQ, but if it's not then you don't want to include so many that it's unbelievable.

Of course, there are occasions when you may need to go against the demographics, for example, using current affairs, your story may be about Syrian refugees coming to a small English town and trying to settle in. In that story your main characters will be Syrian, and the people they may ask for help may also be non-white.

Nanowrimo 2016 is here!

It's NaNoWriMo time again and I'm trying to get back into a writing habit. I've hardly written anything in the last year, having become a mum in March, but I've had ideas building up and now I want to commit them to paper.

For a long time I've wanted to write a Christian novel but not had any ideas, but then I had a nightmare about a car crash that inspired an idea for a story that I think actually has legs. The nightmare is actually written out in full with very little added as one of the chapters of the story. 

Synopsis:
Have you ever thought about angels? Holly has, from the Christmas angels to her gran’s army of angels that watch over her. Then, after miraculously surviving a car crash, she becomes one – and she discovers that everything she thought she knew was wrong.
And when Azrael (the Angel of Death) and Lucifer, the Angel of Light (aka the Devil), start dropping in to ask for help, she knows she's in big trouble.

Tagline: Sometimes, the Devil can be truly angelic...

Review: The Little Bookshop of Lonely Hearts

Take a crumbling London bookshop; add in an eclectic staff including painfully shy Verity, tattooed and blue-haired Nina, and newly-appointed romance book-loving owner Posy; then throw the self-styled “rudest man in London” into the mix and you get this charming rom-com of a book.

There are definite nods to Pride and Prejudice, one scene that seems to have been borrowed straight from Bridget Jones’ Diary, and a smattering of intentionally terrible Regency bodice ripping scenes conjured from Posy’s imagination.

Posy inherits Bookends bookshop from eccentric owner Lavinia and decides to rebrand as romantic fiction specialist shop Happy Ever After, having to fend off the unwanted interference from high-handed Sebastian, who owns the rest of the mews. The results are predictable but no less enjoyable for it.

A delightfully fun and easy read.

• ISBN 9780008173111
• Published by Harper
• Paperback
• RRP £7.99
• On sale 25th August 2016

S is for Show, don't tell

When I was writing my first draft of Witness I introduced the character Wade by describing his physical appearance compared to his friend Ethan and went on to tell the reader how he became friends with Lois - because they shared a similar taste in music. It was a really dull page of prose.

In the rewrite I decided I wanted to make Wade a bigger character in the story and went back to specifically look for places where he was included. I'm ashamed to admit that I left in the boring introduction to start with, but then I came to my senses and realised that it wasn't really adding to the story. I took out the description and added a scene where Lois was revising listening to her iPod and Wade came over to join her because he heard the music. It said the same as the orginal but it was much more interesting because it included dialogue and interaction between the characters.

Lesson learned - show, don't tell!

Book review: The Crocodile Under the Bed by Judith Kerr

This is not the usual sort of book I review as it's not YA! It's a kids' book designed for toddlers/early readers, and I was asked to review it because I have a small person of my own now. She's a bit young for this book at the moment, but it will go onto her bookshelf ready for when she's ready to start enjoying books.

On to the review...

Every child knows the space under the bed is where monsters live, but in this charming story it’s not scary creatures but a party-loving crocodile that’s lurking beneath Matty’s bed. The story is simple – Matty is sick and can’t go to a big party with his sister, so the crocodile takes him to his own party in the jungle.

The book is sized perfectly for small hands, with easy to hold, chew-proof board pages. Inside it i s filled with beautiful illustrations of Matty and the crocodile enjoying a celebration with the animals. There are even a couple of cameo appearances by the author’s most well-known and loved character, Mog the forgetful cat, for readers to try to spot.

The Crocodile Under the Bed would make a lovely bedtime story or something for older siblings to read to younger brothers or sisters.

• Published by Harper Collins
• RRP £6.99
• ISBN 978-0-00-816668-7